"W
YANDOTTTE,
or The Hutted Knoll"
is, in its general features, precisely similar to the novels enumerated
in the title.
* It is a forest subject; and, when
we say this, we give
assurance
that the story is a good one; for Mr. Cooper has never been known to
fail,
either in the forest or upon the sea. The interest, as usual, has no
reference
to
plot, of which, indeed, our novelist seems altogether
regardless,
or incapable, but depends, first, upon the nature of the theme;
secondly,
upon a Robinson-Crusoe-like detail in its management; and thirdly, upon
the frequently repeated portraiture of the half-civilized Indian. In
saying
that the interest depends,
first, upon the nature of the
theme,
we mean to suggest that this theme -- life in the Wilderness -- is one
of intrinsic and universal interest, appealing to the heart of man in
all
phases; a theme, like that of life upon the ocean, so unfailingly
omni-prevalent
in its power of arresting and absorbing attention, that while success
or
popularity is, with such a subject, expected as a matter of course, a
failure
might be properly regarded as conclusive evidence of imbecility on the
part of the author. The two theses in question have been handled
usque ad nauseam -- and this through the instinctive perception of
the universal interest which appertains to them. A writer, distrustful
of his powers, can scarcely do better than discuss either one or the
other.
A man of genius will rarely, and should never, undertake either; first,
because both are excessively hackneyed; and, secondly, because the
reader
never fails, in forming his opinion of a book, to make discount, either
wittingly or unwittingly, for that intrinsic interest which is
inseparable
from the subject and independent of the manner in which it is treated.
Very few and very dull indeed are those who do not instantaneously
perceive
the distinction; and thus there are two great classes of fictions, -- a
popular
[page 390:] and widely circulated class,
read
with pleasure, but without admiration in which the author is lost or
forgotten;
or remembered, if at all, with something very nearly akin to contempt;
and then, a class not so popular, nor so widely diffused, in which, at
every paragraph, arises a distinctive and highly pleasurable interest,
springing from our perception and appreciation of the skill employed,
of
the genius evinced in the composition. After perusal of the one class,
we think solely of the book after reading the other, chiefly of the
author.
The former class leads to popularity -- the latter to fame. In the
former
case, the books sometimes live, while the authors usually die; in the
latter,
even when the works perish, the man survives. Among American writers of
the less generally circulated, but more worthy and more artistical
fictions,
we may mention Mr. Brockden Brown, Mr. John Neal, Mr. Simms, Mr.
Hawthorne;
at the head of the more popular division we may place Mr. Cooper.
"The Hutted Knoll," without
pretending to detail
facts, gives a narrative of fictitious events, similar, in nearly all
respects,
to occurrences which actually happened during the opening scenes of the
Revolution, and at other epochs of our history. It pictures the
dangers,
difficulties, and distresses of a large family, living, completely
insulated,
in the forest. The tale commences with a description of the "region
which
lies in the angle formed by the junction of the Mohawk with the Hudson,
extending as far south as the line of Pennsylvania, and west to the
verge
of that vast rolling plain which composes Western New York" -- a region
of which the novelist has already frequently written, and the whole of
which, with a trivial exception, was a wilderness before the
Revolution.
Within this district, and on a creek running into the Unadilla, a
certain
Captain Willoughby purchases an estate, or "patent," and there retires,
with his family and dependents, to pass the close of his life in
agricultural
pursuits. He has been an officer in the British army, but, after
serving
many years, has sold his commission, and purchased one for his only
son,
Robert, who alone does not accompany the party into the forest. This
party
consists of the captain himself; his wife; his daughter, Beulah; an
adopted
daughter, Maud Meredith; an invalid sergeant, Joyce, who had served
under
the captain; a Presbyterian
[page 391:] preacher,
Mr.
Woods; a Scotch mason, Jamie Allen; an Irish laborer, Michael O'Hearn;
a Connecticut man, Joel Strides; four negroes, Old Plin and Young Plin,
Big Smash and Little Smash; eight axe-men; a house-carpenter; a
mill-wright,
&c., &c. Besides these, a Tuscarora Indian called Nick, or
Wyandotté, accompanies the expedition. This Indian, who
figures
largely in the story, and gives it its title, may be considered as the
principal character -- the one chiefly elaborated. He is an outcast
from
his tribe, has been known to Captain Willoughby for thirty years, and
is
a compound of all the good and bad qualities which make up the
character
of the half-civilized Indian. He does not remain with the settlers; but
appears and re-appears at intervals upon the scene.
Nearly the whole of the first volume
is occupied
with a detailed account of the estate purchased, (which is termed "The
Hutted Knoll" from a natural mound upon which the principal house is
built)
and of the progressive arrangements and improvements. Toward the close
of the volume the Revolution commences; and the party at the "Knoll"
are
besieged by a band of savages and "rebels," with whom an understanding
exists, on the part of Joel Strides, the Yankee. This traitor,
instigated
by the hope of possessing Captain Willoughby's estate, should it be
confiscated,
brings about a series of defections from the party of the settlers, and
finally, deserting himself, reduces the whole number to six or seven,
capable
of bearing arms. Captain Willoughby resolves, however, to defend his
post.
His son, at this juncture, pays him a clandestine visit, and,
endeavoring
to reconnoitre the position of the Indians, is made captive. The
captain,
in an attempt at rescue, is murdered by Wyandotté, whose
vindictive
passions had been aroused by ill-timed allusions, on the part of
Willoughby,
to floggings previously inflicted, by his orders, upon the Indian.
Wyandotté,
however, having satisfied his personal vengeance, is still the ally of
the settlers. He guides Maud, who is beloved by Robert, to the hut in
which
the latter is confined, and effects his escape. Aroused by this escape,
the Indians precipitate their attack upon the Knoll, which, through the
previous treachery of Strides in ill-hanging a gate, is immediately
carried.
Mrs. Willoughby, Beulah, and others of the party, are killed.
[page
392:] Maud is secreted and thus saved by Wyandotté.
At
the last moment, when all is apparently lost, a reinforcement appears,
under command of Evert Beekman, the husband of Beulah; and the
completion
of the massacre is prevented. Woods, the preacher, had left the Knoll,
and made his way through the enemy, to inform Beekman of the dilemma of
his friends. Maud and Robert Willoughby are, of course, happily
married.
The concluding scene of the novel shows us Wyandotté repenting
the
murder of Willoughby, and converted to Christianity through the agency
of Woods.
It will be at once seen that there is
nothing
original in this story. On the contrary, it is even excessively
common-place.
The lover, for example, rescued from captivity by the mistress; the
Knoll
carried through the treachery of an inmate; and the salvation of the
besieged,
at the very last moment, by a reinforcement arriving, in consequence of
a message borne to a friend by one of the besieged, without the
cognizance
of the others; these, we say, are incidents which have been the common
property of every novelist since the invention of letters. And as
for
plot, there has been no attempt at any thing of the kind. The tale
is a mere succession of events, scarcely any one of which has any
necessary
dependence upon any one other. Plot, however, is, at best, an
artificial
effect, requiring, like music, not only a natural bias, but long
cultivation
of taste for its full appreciation; some of the finest narratives in
the
world -- "Gil-Blas" and "Robinson Crusoe," for example -- have been
written
without its employment; and "The Hutted Knoll," like all the sea and
forest
novels of Cooper, has been made deeply interesting, although depending
upon this peculiar source of interest not at all. Thus the absence of
plot
can never be critically regarded as a
defect; although its
judicious use, in all cases aiding and in no case injuring other
effects,
must be regarded as of a very high order of merit.
There are one or two points, however,
in the mere
conduct of the story now before us, which may,
perhaps, be considered
as defective. For instance, there is too much
obviousness in
all
that appertains to the hanging of the large gate. In more than a dozen
instances, Mrs. Willoughby is made to allude to the delay in the
hanging;
so that the reader is too positively and pointedly
[page 393:]
forced to perceive that this delay is to result in the capture of the
Knoll.
As we are never in doubt of the fact, we feel diminished interest when
it actually happens. A single vague allusion, well-managed, would have
been in the true artistical spirit.
Again; we see too plainly, from the
first, that Beekman
is to marry Beulah, and that Robert Willoughby is to marry Maud. The
killing
of Beulah, of Mrs. Willoughby, and Jamie Allen, produces, too, a
painful
impression which does not properly appertain to the right fiction.
Their
deaths affect us as revolting and supererogatory; since the purposes of
the story are not thereby furthered in any regard. To Willoughby's
murder,
however distressing, the reader makes no similar objection; merely
because
in his decease is fulfilled a species of poetical justice. We may
observe
here, nevertheless, that his repeated references to his flogging the
Indian
seem unnatural, because we have otherwise no reason to think him a
fool,
or a madman, and these references, under the circumstances, are
absolutely
insensate. We object, also, to the manner in which the general interest
is dragged out, or suspended. The besieging party are kept before the
Knoll
so long, while so little is done, and so many opportunities of action
are
lost, that the reader takes it for granted that nothing of consequence
will occur -- that the besieged will be finally delivered. He gets so
accustomed
to the presence of danger that its excitement, at length, departs. The
action is not sufficiently rapid. There is too much procrastination.
There
is too much mere talk for talk's sake. The interminable discussions
between
Woods and Captain Willoughby are, perhaps, the worst feature of the
book,
for they have not even the merit of referring to the matters on hand.
In
general, there is quite too much colloquy for the purpose of
manifesting
character, and too little for the explanation of motive. The characters
of the drama would have been better made out by action; while the
motives
to action, the reasons for the different courses of conduct adopted by
the
dramatis personÆ, might have been made to
proceed
more satisfactorily from their own mouths, in casual conversations,
than
from that of the author in person. To conclude our remarks upon the
head
of ill-conduct in the story, we may mention occasional incidents of the
merest melodramatic absurdity: as, for example, at page 156,
[page
394:] of the second volume, where "Willoughby had an arm
round
the waist of Maud, and bore her forward with a rapidity to which her
own
strength was entirely unequal." We may be permitted to doubt whether a
young lady of sound health and limbs, exists, within the limits of
Christendom,
who could not run faster, on her own proper feet, for any considerable
distance, than she could be carried upon
one arm of either
the Cretan Milo or of the Hercules Farnese.
On the other hand, it would be easy
to designate
many particulars which are admirably handled. The love of Maud Meredith
for Robert Willoughby is painted with exquisite skill and truth. The
incident
of the tress of hair and box is naturally and effectively conceived. A
fine collateral interest is thrown over the whole narrative by the
connection
of the theme with that of the Revolution; and, especially, there is an
excellent dramatic point, at page 124 of the second volume, where
Wyandotté,
remembering the stripes inflicted upon him by Captain Willoughby, is
about
to betray him to his foes, when his purpose is arrested by a casual
glimpse,
through the forest, of the hut which contains Mrs. Willoughby, who had
preserved the life of the Indian, by inoculation for the small-pox.
In the depicting of character, Mr.
Cooper has been
unusually successful in "Wyandotté." One or two of his
personages,
to be sure, must be regarded as little worth. Robert Willoughby, like
most
novel heroes, is a nobody; that is to say, there is nothing about him
which
may be looked upon as distinctive. Perhaps he is rather silly than
otherwise;
as, for instance, when he confuses all his father's arrangements for
his
concealment, and bursts into the room before Strides afterward
insisting
upon accompanying that person to the Indian encampment, without any
possible
or impossible object. Woods, the parson, is a sad bore, upon the
Dominie
Sampson plan, and is, moreover, caricatured. Of Captain Willoughby we
have
already spoken -- he is too often on stilts. Evert Beekman and Beulah
are
merely episodical. Joyce is nothing in the world but Corporal Trim --
or,
rather, Corporal Trim and water. Jamie Allen, with his prate about
Catholicism,
is insufferable. But Mrs. Willoughby, the humble, shrinking, womanly
wife,
whose whole existence centres in her
[page 395:]
affections,
is worthy of Mr. Cooper. Maud Meredith is still better. In fact, we
know
no female portraiture, even in Scott, which surpasses her; and yet the
world has been given to understand, by the enemies of the novelist,
that
he is incapable of depicting a woman. Joel Strides will be recognized
by
all who are conversant with his general prototypes of Connecticut.
Michael
O'Hearn, the County Leitrim man, is an Irishman all over, and his
portraiture
abounds in humor; as, for example, at page 31, of the first volume,
where
he has a difficulty with a skiff, not being able to account for its
revolving
upon its own axis, instead of moving forward! or, at page 132, where,
during
divine service, to exclude at least a portion of the heretical
doctrine,
he stops
one of his ears with his thumb; or, at page 195,
where a passage occurs so much to our purpose that we will be pardoned
for quoting it in full. Captain Willoughby is drawing his son up
through
a window, from his enemies below. The assistants, placed at a distance
from this window to avoid observation from without, are ignorant of
what
burthen is at the end of the rope:
The men did as ordered,
raising their load
from the ground a foot or two at a time. In this manner the burthen
approached,
yard after yard, until it was evidently drawing near the window.
"It's the captain hoisting up the
big baste of a
hog, for provisioning the hoose again a saige," whispered Mike to the
negroes,
who grinned as they tugged; "and, when the craitur squails, see to it,
that ye do not squail yourselves." At that moment, the head and
shoulders
of a man appeared at the window. Mike let go the rope, seized a chair,
and was about to knock the intruder upon the head; but the captain
arrested
the blow.
"It's one o' the vagabone Injins
that has undermined
the hog and come up in its stead," roared Mike.
"It's my son,' said the captain;
`see that you are
silent and secret."
The negroes are, without exception, admirably drawn.
The Indian, Wyandotté, however, is the great feature of the
book,
and is, in every respect, equal to the previous Indian creations of the
author of "The Pioneer." Indeed, we think this "forest gentleman"
superior
to the other noted heroes of his kind the heroes which have been
immortalized
by our novelist. His keen sense of the distinction, in his own
character,
between the chief, Wyandotté, and the drunken vagabond, Sassy
Nick;
his chivalrous delicacy toward Maud, in never disclosing to her that
knowledge
of her real feelings toward Robert Willoughby, which his own Indian
intuition
had discovered; his enduring animosity
[page 396:]
toward Captain Willoughby, softened, and for thirty years delayed,
through
his gratitude to the wife; and then, the vengeance consummated, his
pity
for that wife conflicting with his exultation at the deed -- these, we
say, are all traits of a lofty excellence indeed. Perhaps the most
effective
passage in the book, and that which, most distinctively, brings out the
character of the Tuscarora, is to be found at pages 50, 51, 52 and 53
of
the second volume, where, for some trivial misdemeanor, the captain
threatens
to make use of the whip. The manner in which the Indian
harps
upon the threat, returning to it again and again, in every variety of
phrase,
forms one of the finest pieces of mere character-painting with which we
have any acquaintance.
The most obvious and most
unaccountable faults of
"The Hutted Knoll," are those which appertain to the
style
-- to the mere grammatical construction; -- for, in other and more
important
particulars of style, Mr. Cooper, of late days, has made a very
manifest
improvement. His sentences, however, are arranged with an awkwardness
so
remarkable as to be matter of absolute astonishment, when we consider
the
education of the author, and his long and continual practice with the
pen.
In minute descriptions of localities, any verbal inaccuracy, or
confusion,
becomes a source of vexation and misunderstanding, detracting very much
from the pleasure of perusal; and in these inaccuracies
"Wyandotté"
abounds. Although, for instance, we carefully read and re-read that
portion
of the narrative which details the situation of the Knoll, and the
construction
of the buildings and walls about it, we were forced to proceed with the
story without any exact or definite impressions upon the subject.
Similar
difficulties, from similar causes, occur
passim throughout
the book. For example: at page 41, vol. I:
"The Indian gazed at the house, with
that fierce
intentness which sometimes glared, in a manner that had got to be, in
its
ordinary aspects, dull and besotted." This it is utterly impossible to
comprehend. We presume, however, the intention is to say that although
the Indian's ordinary manner (of gazing) had "got to be" dull and
besotted,
he occasionally gazed with an intentness that glared, and that he did
so
in the instance in question. The "got to be" is atrocious -- the whole
sentence no less so.
[page 397:]
Here, at page 9, vol. I., is
something excessively
vague: "Of the latter character is the face of most of that region
which
lies in the angle formed by the junction of the Mohawk with the
Hudson,"
&c. &c. The Mohawk, joining the Hudson, forms
two
angles, of course, -- an acute and an obtuse one; and, without farther
explanation, it is difficult to say which is intended.
At page 55, vol. I., we read: -- "The
captain, owing
to his English education, had avoided straight lines, and formal paths;
giving to the little spot the improvement on nature which is a
consequence
of embellishing her works without destroying them. On each side of this
lawn was an orchard, thrifty and young, and which
were
already
beginning to show signs of putting forth their blossoms." Here we are
tautologically
informed that improvement is a consequence of embellishment, and
supererogatorily
told that the rule holds good only where the embellishment is not
accompanied
by destruction. Upon the "each orchard
were" it is
needless
to comment.
At page 30, vol. I., is something
similar, where
Strides is represented as "never doing any thing that required a
particle
more than the exertion and strength that were absolutely necessary to
effect
his object." Did Mr. C. ever hear of any labor that
required
more exertion than was
necessary? He means to say that
Strides
exerted himself no farther than was necessary -- that's all.
At page 59, vol. I., we find this
sentence -- "He
was advancing by the only road that was ever traveled by the stranger
as
he approached the Hut; or, he came up the valley." This is merely a
vagueness
of speech. "Or" is intended to imply "that is to say." The whole would
be clearer thus -- "He was advancing by the valley -- the only road
traveled
by a stranger approaching the Hut." We have here sixteen words, instead
of Mr. Cooper's twenty-five.
At page 8, vol. II., is an
unpardonable awkwardness,
although an awkwardness strictly grammatical. "I was a favorite, I
believe,
with, certainly was much petted by, both." Upon this we need make no
farther
observation. It speaks for itself.
We are aware, however, that there is
a certain air
of unfairness, in thus quoting detached passages, for animadversion of
this
[page 398:] kind; for, however strictly at
random
our quotations may really be, we have, of course, no means of proving
the
fact to our readers; and there are
no authors, from whose
works individual inaccurate sentences may not be culled. But we mean to
say that Mr. Cooper, no doubt through haste or neglect, is
remarkably
and
especially inaccurate, as a general rule; and, by way
of demonstrating this assertion, we will dismiss our extracts at
random,
and discuss some entire page of his composition. More than this: we
will
endeavor to select that particular page upon which it might naturally
be
supposed he would bestow the most careful attention. The reader will
say
at once -- "Let this be his
first page -- the first page
of
his Preface." This page, then, shall be taken of course.
The history of the borders
is filled with
legends of the sufferings of isolated families, during the troubled
scenes
of colonial warfare. Those which we now offer to the reader, are
distinctive
in many of their leading facts, if not rigidly true in the details. The
first alone is necessary to the legitimate objects of fiction.
"
Abounds with legends," would be better than
"is filled with legends;" for it is clear that if the history were
filled
with legends, it would be all legend and no history. The word "of,"
too,
occurs, in the first sentence, with an unpleasant frequency. The
"those"
commencing the second sentence, grammatically refers to the noun
"scenes,"
immediately preceding, but is intended for "legends." The adjective
"distinctive"
is vaguely and altogether improperly employed. Mr. C. we believe means
to say, merely, that although the details of his legends may not be
strictly
true, facts similar to his leading ones have actually occurred. By use
of the word
"distinctive," however, he has contrived to convey
a
meaning nearly converse. In saying that his legend is
"distinctive"
in many of the leading facts, he has said what he, clearly, did not
wish
to say -- viz.: that his legend contained facts which distinguished it
from all other legends -- in other words, facts never before discussed
in other legends, and belonging peculiarly to his own. That Mr. C.
did mean what we suppose, is rendered evident by the third sentence
-- "The first alone is necessary to the legitimate objects of fiction."
This third sentence itself, however, is very badly constructed. "The
first"
can refer, grammatically, only to "facts;" but no such
[page
399:]
reference is intended. If we ask the question -- what is meant by "the
first?" --
what "alone is necessary to the legitimate
objects
of fiction?" -- the natural reply is, "that facts similar to the
leading
ones have actually happened." This circumstance is alone to be cared
for
-- this consideration "alone is necessary to the legitimate objects of
fiction."
"One of the misfortunes of a nation
is to hear nothing
besides its own praises." This is the fourth sentence, and is by no
means
lucid. The design is to say that individuals composing a nation, and
living
altogether within the national bounds, hear from each other only
praises
of the nation, and that this is a misfortune to the individuals, since
it mis-leads them in regard to the actual condition of the nation. Here
it will be seen that, to convey the intended idea, we have been forced
to make distinction between the nation and its individual members; for
it is evident that a nation is considered as such only in reference to
other nations; and thus,
as a nation, it hears
very
much "besides its own praises;" that is to say, it hears the
detractions
of other rival nations. In endeavoring to compel his meaning within the
compass of a brief sentence, Mr. Cooper has completely sacrificed its
intelligibility.
The fifth sentence runs thus: --
"Although the American
Revolution was probably as just an effort as was ever made by a people
to resist the first inroads of oppression, the cause had its evil
aspects,
as well as all other human struggles."
The American Revolution is here
improperly called
an "effort." The effort was the cause, of which the Revolution was the
result. A rebellion is an "effort" to effect a revolution. An "inroad
of
oppression" involves an untrue metaphor; for "inroad" appertains
to
aggression, to attack, to active assault. "The cause had its evil
aspects,
as well as all other human struggles," implies that the cause had not
only
its evil aspects, but had, also, all other human struggles. If the
words
must be retained at all, they should be thus arranged -- "The cause
like
[or as well as] all other human struggles, had its evil aspects;" or
better
thus -- "The cause had its evil aspect, as have all human struggles."
"Other"
is superfluous.
The sixth sentence is thus written:
-- "We have been
so much
[page 400:] accustomed to hear every thing
extolled, of late years, that could be dragged into the remotest
connection
with that great event, and the principles which led to it, that there
is
danger of overlooking truth in a pseudo patriotism." The "of late
years,"
here, should follow the "accustomed," or precede the "We have been;"
and
the Greek "pseudo" is objectionable, since its exact equivalent is to
be
found in the English "false." "Spurious" would be better, perhaps, than
either.
Inadvertences such as these sadly
disfigure the style
of "The Hutted Knoll;" and every true friend of its author must regret
his inattention to the minor morals of the Muse. But these "minor
morals,"
it may be said, are trifles at best. Perhaps so. At all events, we
should
never have thought of dwelling so pertinaciously upon the unessential
demerits
of "Wyandotté," could we have discovered any more momentous upon
which to comment.