"Night and Morning." A Novel. By the author of Pelham, Rienzi, Eugene Aram, &c. 2 vols. Re-published by Harper & Brothers, New York.
The right hon. Charles Leopold Beaufort, of Beaufort
Court, England, a proud and misanthropical old bachelor, with a rental
of twenty thousand pounds, has two nephews, Philip and Robert Beaufort.
The former, who is the elder of the two, and heir-apparent to the uncle's
estate, is thoughtless and generous, with unsteady principles. The latter
is a crafty man-of-the-world, whose only honesty consists in appearing
honest -- a scrupulous decorist. Philip, in love with Catharine Morton,
the daughter of a tradesman, and in fear of his aristocratic uncle's displeasure,
is married clandestinely, in a remote village of Wales, by a quondam college
friend, to whom he had presented a living -- the Rev. Caleb Price. The
better to keep the secret, a very old Welshman, certain soon to die, and
William Smith, Philip's servant, are the sole witnesses of the ceremony.
This performed, Smith is hired to bury himself in Australia until called
for, while the deaf man dies as expected. Some time having elapsed, Philip,
dreading accident to the register, writes to Caleb for an attested copy
of the record. Caleb is too ill to make it, but employs a neighboring curate,
Morgan Jones, to make and attest it, and despatches it, just before dying,
to Philip, who, fearing his wife's impatience of the concealment required,
deposites the document, without her knowledge, in a secret drawer of a
bureau. The register itself is afterwards accidentally destroyed. Catharine
has soon two children -- first Philip, the hero of the novel, and then
Sydney. For their sakes she bravely endures the stigma upon her character.
She continues to live openly with her husband as his mistress, bearing
her maiden name of Morton; and the uncle, whose nerves would have been
shocked at a mis-alliance, and who would have disinherited its perpetrator,
winks at what he considers the venial vice. The old gentleman lives on
for sixteen years, and yet no disclosure is made. At last he dies, bequeathing
his property to his eldest nephew, as was anticipated. The latter prepares
forthwith to own Catharine as his wife; relates to his brother the facts
of the clandestine marriage; speaks of the secreted document, without designating
the place of deposit; is disbelieved by that person entirely; mounts his
horse to make arrangements for a second wedding, and for proving the first;
is thrown, breaks his neck, and expires without uttering a word. Catharine,
ignorant of the secret drawer (although aware that a record
We do not give this as the plot of "Night and Morning," but as the ground-work of the plot; which latter, woven from the incidents above mentioned, is in itself exceedingly complex. The ground work, as will be seen, is of no very original character -- it is even absurdly common-place. We are not asserting too much when we say that every second novel since the flood has turned upon some series of hopeless efforts, either to establish legitimacy, or to prove a will, or to get possession of a great sum of money most unjustly withheld, or to find out a ragamuffin of a father, who had been much better left unfound. But, saying nothing of the basis upon which this story has been erected, the story itself is, in many respects, worthy its contriver.
The word "plot," as commonly accepted, conveys but
an indefinite meaning. Most persons think of it as of simple complexity;
and into this error even so fine a critic as Augustus William Schlegel
has obviously fallen, when he confounds its idea with that of the mere
intrigue in which the Spanish dramas of Cervantes and Calderon abound.
But the greatest involution of incident will not result in plot; which,
properly defined, is that in which no part can be displaced without
ruin to the whole. It may be described as a building so dependently
constructed, that to change the position of a single brick is to overthrow
the entire fabric. In this definition and description, we of course refer
only to that infinite perfection
So careful has been our author in this working-up
In the first place, there are some descriptive passages such as the love adventures of Caleb Price, the account of Gawtrey's early life, prefaced by that of his grandfather, and the dinner-scene at Love's, which scarcely come within the category of matters tending to develop the main events. These things, in short, might have been omitted with advantage (because without detriment) to the whole.
At page 254, vol. 2, we perceive the first indications of slovenliness, (arising no doubt from the writer's anxiety to conclude his task) in an incident utterly without aim, and composed at random. We mean the relapse of Philip into a second illness when nursed by Fanny through the first, at the house of old Gawtrey.
At page 21, vol. 1, we are told that Caleb Price, having received from his friend Beaufort a certain letter (whose contents would have been important in the subsequent attempts to establish Catharine's claim) held it over the flame of the candle, and that "as the paper dropped on the carpetless floor, Mr. Jones prudently set thereon the broad sole of his boot, and the maid servant brushed it into the grate."
"Ah, trample it out; hurry it among the ashes. The last as the rest," said Caleb, hoarsely. "Friendship, fortune, hope, love, life -- a little flame -- and then -- and then --"
"Do n't be uneasy -- it 's quite out," said Mr. Jones. Now this is related with much emphasis; and, upon reading it, we resolved to hold in memory that this important paper, although torn, was still unburned, and that its fragments had been thrown into a vacant grate. In fact, it was the design of the novelist to re-produce these fragments in the dénouement -- a design which he has forgotten to carry out.
We have defined the word "plot," in a definition of our own to be sure, but in one which we do not the less consider substantially correct; and we have said that it has been a main point with Mr. Bulwer in this his last novel, "Night and Morning," to work up his plot as near perfection as possible. We have asserted, too, that his design is well accomplished; but we do not the less assert that it has been conceived and executed in error.
The interest of plot, referring, as it does, to cultivated
thought in the reader, and appealing to considerations analogous with those
which are the essence of sculptural taste, is by no means a popular interest;
although it has the peculiarity of being appreciated in its atoms by all,
while in its totality of beauty it is comprehended but by the few. The
pleasure which the many derive from it is disjointed, ineffective, and
evanescent; and even in the case of the critical reader it is a pleasure
which may be purchased too dearly. A good tale may be written without it.
Some of the finest fictions in the world have neglected it altogether.
We see nothing of it in Gil
Very little reflection might have sufficed to convince Mr. Bulwer that narratives, even one fourth so long as the one now lying upon our table, are essentially inadapted to that nice and complex adjustment of incident at which he has made this desperate attempt. In the wire-drawn romances which have been so long fashionable, (God only knows how or why) the pleasure we derive (if any) is a composite one, and made up of the respective sums of the various pleasurable sentiments experienced in perusal. Without excessive and fatiguing exertion, inconsistent with legitimate interest, the mind cannot comprehend at one time, and in one survey, the numerous individual items which go to establish the whole. Thus the high ideal sense of the unique is sure to be wanting: -- for, however absolute in itself be the unity of the novel, it must inevitably fail of appreciation. We speak now of that species of unity which is alone worth the attention of the critic -- the unity or totality of effect.
But we could never bring ourselves to attach any
idea of merit to mere length in the abstract. A long story does
not appear to us necessarily twice as good as one only half so long. The
ordinary talk about "continuous and sustained effort" is pure twaddle and
nothing more. Perseverance is one thing and genius is another -- whatever
Buffon or Hogarth may assert to the contrary -- and notwithstanding that,
in many passages of the dogmatical literature of old Rome, such phrases
as "diligentia maxima," "diligentia mirabilis," can be construed
only as "great talent" or "wonderful ability." Now if the author of "Ernest
Maltravers," implicitly following authority like les moutons de
Panurge, will persist in writing
And here, could he see these comments upon a work which, (estimating it, as is the wont of all artists of his calibre, by the labor which it has cost him,) he considers his chef d'œuvre, he would assure us, with a smile, that it is precisely because the book is not narrative, and is dramatic, that he holds it in so lofty an esteem. Now in regard to its being dramatic, we should reply that, so far as the radical and ineradicable deficiencies of the drama go -- it is. This continual and vexatious shifting of scene, with a view of bringing up events to the time being, originated at a period when books were not; and in fact, had the drama not preceded books, it might never have succeeded them -- we might, and probably should, never have had a drama at all. By the frequent "bringing up" of his events the dramatist strove to supply, as well as he could, the want of the combining, arranging, and especially of the commenting power, now in possession of the narrative author. No doubt it was a deep but vague sense of this want which brought into birth the Greek chorus -- a thing altogether apart from the drama itself -- never upon the stage -- and representing, or personifying, the expression of the sympathy of the audience in the matters transacted.
In brief, while the drama of colloquy, vivacious and breathing of life, is well adopted into narration, the drama of action and passion will always prove, when employed beyond due limits, a source of embarrassment to the narrator, and it can afford him, at best, nothing which he does not already possess in full force. We have spoken upon this head much at length; for we remember that, in some preface to one of his previous novels, (some preface in which he endeavored to pre-reason and pre-coax us into admiration of what was to follow -- a bad practice,) Mr. Bulwer was at great pains to insist upon the peculiar merits of what he even then termed the dramatic conduct of his story. The simple truth was that, then as now, he had merely concentrated into his book all the necessary evils of the stage.
Giving up his attention to the one point upon which
we have commented, our novelist has failed to do himself justice in others.
The overstrained effort at perfection of plot has seduced him into absurd
sacrifices of verisimilitude, as regards the connexion of his
dramatis personæ each with each, and each with the main events.
However incidental be the appearance of any personage upon the stage, this
personage is sure to be linked in, will I nill I, with the matters in hand.
Philip, on the stage-coach, for example, converses with but one individual,
William Gawtrey; yet this man's fate (not subsequently but previously)
is interwoven into that of Philip himself, through the latter's relationship
to Lilburne. The hero goes to his mother's grave, and there comes in contact
with this Gawtrey's father. He meets Fanny, and Fanny happens to be also
involved in his destiny (a pet word, conveying a pet idea of the
author's)
In delineation of character, our artist has done little worth notice. His highest merit in this respect is, with a solitary exception, the negative one of not having subjected himself to dispraise. Catharine and Camilla are -- pretty well in their way. Philip is very much like all other heroes -- perhaps a little more stiff, a little more obstinate, and a little more desperately unlucky than the generality of his class. Sydney is drawn with truth. Plaskwith, Plimmins, and the Mortons, just sufficiently caricatured, are very good outline copies from the shaded originals of Dickens. Of Gawtrey -- father and son, -- of De Burgh Smith, of Robert Beaufort and of Lilburne, what is it possible to say, except that they belong to that extensive firm of Gawtrey, Smith, Beaufort, Lilburne and company, which has figured in every novel since the days of Charles Grandison, and which is doomed to the same eternal con-figuration till romance-writing shall be no more?
For Fanny the author distinctly avows a partiality;
and he does not err in his preference. We have observed, in some previous
review, that original characters, so called, can only be critically
praised as such, either when presenting qualities known in real life, but
never before depicted (a combination nearly impossible) or when presenting
qualities which, although unknown, or even known to be hypothetical, are
so skilfully adapted to the circumstances around them, that our sense of
fitness is not offended, and we find ourselves seeking a reason why those
things might not have been which we are still satisfied
are not. Fanny appertains to this latter class of originality -- which
in itself belongs to the loftier regions of the Ideal. Her
first movements in the story, before her conception (which we have already
characterized as an after-thought) had assumed distinct shape in the brain
of the author, are altogether ineffective and frivolous. They consist of
the unmeaning affectation and rhodomontade with which it is customary to
invest the lunatic in common-place fiction. But the subsequent effects
of love upon her mental development are finely imagined and richly painted;
and, although reason teaches us their impossibility, yet it
Mr. Bulwer has been often and justly charged with defects of style; but the charges have been sadly deficient in specification, and for the most part have confounded the idea of mere language with that of style itself, although the former is no more the latter, than an oak is a forest, or than a word is a thought. Without pausing to define what a little reflection will enable any reader to define for himself, we may say that the chief constituent of a good style (a constituent which, in the case of Washington Irving, has been mistaken for the thing constituted) is what artists have agreed to denominate tone. The writer who, varying this as occasion may require, well adapts it to the fluctuations of his narrative, accomplishes an important object in style. Mr. Bulwer's tone is always correct; and so great is the virtue of this quality that he can scarcely be termed, upon the whole, a bad stylist.
His mere English is grossly defective -- turgid, involved, and ungrammatical. There is scarcely a page of "Night and Morning" upon which a school-boy could not detect at least half a dozen instances of faulty construction. Sentences such as this are continually occurring -- "And at last silenced, if not convinced, his eyes closed, and the tears yet wet upon their lashes, fell asleep." Here, strictly speaking, it is the eyes which "fell asleep," and which were "silent if not convinced." The pronoun, "he," is wanting for the verb "fell." The whole would read better thus -- "And at last, silent, if not convinced, he closed his eyes, and fell asleep with the tears yet on the lashes." It will be seen that, besides other modifications, we have changed "upon" into "on," and omitted "wet" as superfluous when applied to tear; who ever heard of a dry one? The sentence in question, which occurs at page 83, vol. 1, was the first which arrested our attention on opening the book at random; but its errors are sufficiently illustrative of the character of those faults of phraseology in which the work abounds, and which have arisen, not so much through carelessness, as from a peculiar bias in the mind of the writer, leading him, per force, into involution, whether here in style, or elsewhere in plot. The beauty of simplicity is not that which can be appreciated by Mr. Bulwer; and whatever may be the true merits of his intelligence, the merit of luminous and precise thought is evidently not one of the number.
At page 194, vol. 1, we have this -- "I am not what
you seem to suppose -- exactly a swindler, certainly not a robber." Here,
to make himself intelligible, the speaker should have repeated the words
"I am not," before "exactly." As it stands, the sentence does not imply
that "I am not exactly a swindler, &c." but (if anything) that the
person addressed, imagined me to be certainly not a robber but exactly
a swindler -- an implication which it was not intended to convey. Such
awkwardness in a practised writer would be inconceivable, did we not refer
in memory to that moral bias of which we have just spoken. Our readers
will of course examine the English of "Night and Morning" for themselves.
From the evidence of one or two sentences we cannot
Sir Lytton has one desperate mannerism of which we would be glad to see him well rid -- a fashion of beginning short sentences, after very long ones, with the phrase "So there," or something equivalent, and this too, when there is no sequence in the matter to warrant the use of the word "So." Thus, at page 136, vol. i, -- "So there they sat on the cold stone, these two orphans;" at page 179, -- "So there by the calm banks of the placid lake, the youngest born of Catharine passed his tranquil days," -- and just below, on the same page, -- "So thus was he severed from both his protectors, Arthur and Philip;" and at page 241, vol. ii, -- "So there sat the old man," &c. &c. -- and in innumerable other instances throughout the work.
Among the niäiseries of his style we may mention the coxcombical use of little French sentences, without the shadow of an excuse for their employment. At page 22, vol. 2, in the scene at the counterfeiter's cellar, what can be more nonsensical than Gawtrey's " C'est juste; buvez donc, cher ami," -- " C'est juste; buvez donc, vieux rénard," -- and " Ce n'est pas vrai; buvez donc Monsieur Favart?" Why should these platitudes be alone given in French, when it is obvious that the entire conversation was carried on in that tongue? And, again, when, at page 49, Fanny exclaims -- " Méchant, every one dies to Fanny!" why could not this heroine have as well confined herself to one language? At page 38, the climax of absurdity, in this respect, is fairly capped; and it is difficult to keep one's countenance, when we read of a Parisian cobler breathing his last in a garret, and screaming out " Je m'étouffe -- Air!"
Whenever a startling incident is recorded, our novelist seems to make it a point of conscience that somebody should "fall insensible." Thus at page 172, vol. 1, -- " 'My brother, my brother, they have taken thee from me,' cried Philip, and he fell insensible," -- and at page 38, vol. 2, " 'I was unkind to him at the last,' and with these words she fell upon the corpse insensible," &c. &c. There is a great deal too much of this. An occasional swoon is a thing of no consequence, but "even Stamboul must have an end," and Mr. Bulwer should make an end of his syncopes.
Again. That gentlemen and ladies, when called upon
to give alms, or to defray some trifling incidental expense, are in the
invariable habit of giving the whole contents of their purses without examination,
and, moreover, of "throwing" the purse into the bargain, is an idea most
erroneously entertained. At page 55, vol. 1, we are told that Philip, "as
he spoke, slid his purse into the woman's hand." At page 110, "a
hint for money restored Beaufort to his recollection, and he flung
his purse into the nearest hand outstretched to receive it." At page 87,
"Lilburne tossed his purse into the hands of his valet, whose face
seems to lose its anxious embarrassment at the touch of the gold." It is
true that the "anxious embarrassment"
But the predominant and most important failing of the author of "Devereux," in point of style, is an absolute mania for metaphor -- metaphor always running into allegory. Pure allegory is at all times an abomination -- a remnant of antique barbarism -- appealing only to our faculties of comparison, without even a remote interest for our reason, or for our fancy. Metaphor, its softened image, has indisputable force when sparingly and skilfully employed. Vigorous writers use it rarely indeed. Mr. Bulwer is all metaphor or all allegory mixed metaphor and unsustained allegory -- and nothing if neither. He cannot express a dozen consecutive sentences in an honest and manly manner. He is the king-coxcomb of figures-of-speech. His rage for personification is really ludicrous. The simplest noun becomes animate in his hands. Never, by any accident, does he write even so ordinary a word as time, or temper, or talent, without the capital T. Seldom, indeed, is he content with the dignity and mysticism thus imposed; for the most part it is TIME, TEMPER and TALENT. Nor does the common-place character of anything which he wishes to personify exclude it from the prosopopeia. At page 256, volume 1, we have some profound rigmarole, seriously urged, about piemen crying "all hot! all hot!" "in the ear of Infant and Ragged Hunger," thus written; and, at page 207, there is something positively transcendental all about LAW -- a very little thing in itself, in some cases -- but which Mr. Bulwer, in his book, has thought proper to make quite as big as we have printed it above. Who cannot fancy him, in the former instance, saying to himself, as he gnaws the top of his quill, "that is a fine thought!" and exclaiming in the latter, as he puts his finger to the side of his nose, "ah, how very fine an idea that is!"
This absurdity, indeed, is chiefly observable in those philosophical discussions with which he is in the wicked habit of interspersing his fictions, and springs only from a rabid anxiety to look wise -- to appear profound -- even when wisdom is quite out of place, and profundity the quintessence of folly. A "still small voice" has whispered in his ear that, as to the real matter of fact, he is shallow -- a whisper which he does not intend to believe, and which, by dint of loud talking in parables, he hopes to prevent from reaching the ears of the public. Now, in truth, the public, great-gander as it is, is content to swallow his romance without much examination, but cannot help turning up its nose at his logic.
"The men of sense," says Helvetius, "those idols
of the unthinking, are very inferior to the men of passions. It is the
strong passions which, rescuing us from Sloth, can alone impart to us that
continuous and earnest attention necessary to great intellectual efforts"
-- Understanding the word "efforts" in its legitimate force, and not confounding
it altogether with achievements, we may well apply to Mr. Bulwer the philosopher's
remark, thence deducing the secret
In regard to "Night and Morning" we cannot agree with that critical opinion which considers it the best novel of its author. It is only not his worst. It is not as good as Eugene Aram, nor as Rienzi -- and is not at all comparable with Ernest Maltravers. Upon the whole it is a good book. Its merits beyond doubt overbalance its defects, and if we have not dwelt upon the former with as much unction as upon the latter, it is because the Bulwerian beauties are precisely of that secondary character which never fails of the fullest public appreciation.
[Night and Morning was written by Sir Edward Lytton Bulwer.]
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