W
HAT
few
notices we have seen
of this poem,
* speak of it as the production
of
Mrs. Seba
Smith. To be sure, gentlemen may be behind the scenes, and know more
about
the matter than we do. They may have some private reason for
understanding
that black is white — some reason into which we, personally, are not
initiated.
But, to ordinary perception, "Powhatan" is the composition of Seba
Smith,
Esquire, of Jack Downing memory, and
not of
his wife.
Seba
Smith is the name upon the title-page; and the personal pronoun
which
supplies
the place of this well-known prænomen and cognomen in the
preface,
is, we are constrained to say, of the masculine gender. "The author of
Powhatan," — thus, for
[page 216:] example, runs
a
portion of the prolegomena — "does not presume to claim for
his
production the merit of good and genuine poetry, nor does
he
pretend
to assign it a place in the classes or forms into which poetry is
divided" — in all which, by the way, he is decidedly right. But can it
be that
no gentleman has
read even so far as the Preface of the book?
Can
it be that the critics have had no curiosity to creep into the
adyta
— into the inner mysteries of this temple? If so, they are decidedly
right
too.
"Powhatan" is handsomely bound. Its
printing is clear
beyond comparison. Its paper is magnificent, and we undertake to say
(for
we have read it through with the greatest attention)
that there
is not a single typographical error in it, from one end to the other.
Further
than this, in the way of commendation, no man with both brains and
conscience
should proceed. In truth a more absurdly
flat affair — for
flat
is the only epithet which applies in this case — was never before
paraded
to the world, with so grotesque an air of bombast and assumption.
To give some idea of the
tout
ensemble of
the book — we have first a Dedication to the "Young People of the
United
States," in which Mr. Jack Downing lives, in "the hope that he may do
some
good in his day and generation, by adding something to the sources of
rational
enjoyment and
mental culture." Next, we have a Preface,
occupying
four pages, in which, quoting his publishers, the author tells us that
poetry is a "very great bore, and won't sell" — a thing which cannot
be
denied in certain cases, but which Mr. Downing denies in his own. "It
may
be true," he says, "of endless masses of words, that are poured forth
from
the press, under the name of poetry" — but it is not true
"of
genuine poetry — of that which is worthy of the
name" — in short, we
presume he means to say it is not in the least little bit true of
"Powhatan;"
with regard to whose merits he wishes to be tried, not by the critics
(we
fear, in fact, that here it is the critics who will be tried,) [["]]but
by
the
common taste of
common readers" — all which ideas
are
common enough, to say no more.
We have next, a "Sketch of the Character of
Powhatan,"
which is exceedingly interesting and commendable, and which is taken
from
Burk's "History of Virginia:" — four pages more. Then comes a
Proem
— four pages more — forty-eight lines — twelve
lines
[page
217:] to a page — in which all that we can understand, is
something
about the name of "Powhatan"
Descending to a
distant
age,
Embodied forth on the deathless page
|
of the author — that is to say, of Jack Downing, Esquire. We have now
one after the other, C
ANTOS one, two, three,
four,
five, six, and seven — each subdivided into P
ARTS,
by means of Roman
numerals — some of these P
ARTS
comprehending as many as six lines — upon the
principle,
we presume, of packing up precious commodities in small bundles. The
volume
then winds up with
Notes, in proportion of three to one,
as
regards the amount of text, and taken, the most of them, from Burk's
Virginia,
as before.
It is very difficult to keep one's
countenance when
reviewing such a
work as this; but we will do our best,
for
the truth's sake, and put on as serious a face as the case will admit.
The leading fault of "Powhatan,"
then, is precisely
what its author supposes to be its principal merit. "It would be
difficult,"
he says, in that pitiable preface, in which he has so exposed himself,
"to find a poem that embodies more truly the spirit of history, or
indeed
that follows out more faithfully many of its details." It would,
indeed;
and we are very sorry to say it. The truth is, Mr. Downing has never
dreamed
of any artistic
arrangement of his facts. He has gone
straight
forward, like a blind horse, and turned neither to the one side nor to
the other, for fear of stumbling. But he gets them all in — every one
of them — the facts we mean. Powhatan never did anything in his life,
we are sure, that Mr. Downing has not got in his poem. He begins at the
beginning, and goes on steadily to the end — painting away at his
story,
just as a sign-painter at a sign; beginning at the left hand side of
his
board, and plastering through to the right. But he has omitted one very
ingenious trick of the sign-painter. He has forgotten to write under
his
portrait — "
this is a pig," and thus there is some danger of
mistaking
it for an opossum.
But we are growing scurrilous, in
spite of our promise,
and must put on a sober visage once more. It
is a hard
thing,
however, when we have to read and write about such doggrel as this:
[page
218:]
But bravely to the
river's brink
I led my warrior
train,
And face to face, each glance they
sent,
We sent it back
again.
Their werowance looked stern at
me,
And I looked
stern
at him,
And all my warriors clasped their
bows,
And nerved each
heart
and limb.
I raised my heavy war-club high,
And swung it
fiercely
round,
And shook it towards the shallop's
side,
Then laid it on
the
ground.
And then the lighted calumet
I offered to
their
view,
And thrice I drew the sacred smoke,
And toward the
shallop
blew,
And as the curling vapor rose
Soft as a spirit
prayer,
I saw the pale-face leader wave
A white flag in
the
air.
Then launching out their painted
skiff
They boldly came
to
land,
And spoke us many a kindly word,
And took us by
the
hand,
Presenting rich and shining gifts,
Of copper,
brass, and
beads,
To show that they were men like us,
And prone to
generous
deeds.
We held a long and friendly talk,
Inquiring whence
they
came,
And who the leader of their band
And what their
country's name.
And how their mighty shallop moved
Across the
boundless
sea,
And why they touched our great
king's land
Without his liberty. |
It won't do.
We cannot sing to this tune any longer.
We greatly prefer,
John Gilpin was a
gentleman
Of credit and renown,
A train-band captain eke was he
Of famous London town. |
Or —
Old Grimes is dead, that
good
old man,
We ne'er shall see him more,
He used to wear an over-coat
All buttoned down before — |
or lines to that effect — we wish we could remember the words. The
part,
however, about
Their werowance look'd
stern at
me,
And I looked stern at him — [page
219:] |
is not
quite
original with Mr. Downing — is it? We merely ask
for
information. Have we not heard something about
An old crow
sitting on a
hickory limb,
Who winked at me, and I winked at
him. |
The simple truth is, that Mr. Downing never
committed
a greater mistake in his life than when he fancied himself a poet, even
in the ninety-ninth degree. We doubt whether he could distinctly state
the difference between an epic and an epigram. And it will not do for
him
to appeal from the critic to
common readers — because we assure
him his book is a very
uncommon book. We never saw any one so
uncommonly
bad — nor one about whose parturition so uncommon a fuss has been
made,
so little to the satisfaction of common sense. Your poem is a
curiosity,
Mr. Jack Downing; your "Metrical Romance" is not worth a single half
sheet
of the paste-board upon which it is printed. This is our humble and
honest
opinion; and, although honest opinions are not very plentiful just now,
you can have ours at what it is worth. But we wish, before parting, to
ask you one question. What
do you mean by that motto from
Sir Philip Sidney, upon the title-page? "He cometh to you with a tale
that
holdeth children from play, and old men from the chimney-corner." What
do you mean by it, we say. Either you cannot intend to apply it to the
"tale"
of Powhatan, or else all the "old men" in
your particular
neighborhood must be
very old men; and all the "little
children"
a set of dunderheaded little ignoramouses.