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Mary
E. Hewitt.
I am not
aware that Mrs.
Hewitt
has written any prose; but her poems have been many, and occasionally
excellent.
A collection of them was published, in an exquisitely tasteful form, by
Ticknor & co., of Boston. The leading piece, entitled "Songs
of our Land," although the largest, was by no means the most
meritorious.
In general, these compositions evince poetic fervor, classicism, and
keen
appreciation of both moral and physical beauty. No one of them,
perhaps,
can be judiciously commended as a whole; but no one of them is without
merit, and there are several which would do credit to any poet in the
land.
Still, even these latter are particularly rather than generally
commendable.
They lack unity, totality — ultimate effect, but abound in forcible
passages.
For example:
Shall I portray thee in thy
glorious
seeming,
Thou that the pharos of my darkness
art ?
——
Like the blue lotos on its own
clear
river
Lie thy soft eyes, beloved, upon my
soul.
——
And there the slave, a slave no
more,
Hung reverent up the chain he wore.
——
Here 'mid your wild and dark
defile
O'erawed and
wonder-whelmed I
stand,
And ask — "Is this the fearful
vale
That opens on the
shadowy land
?"
——
Oh, friends ! we would be
treasured
still,
Though Time's cold
hand should
cast
His misty veil, in after years,
Over the idol
Past,
Yet send to us some offering
thought
O'er Memory's
ocean wide,
Pure as the Hindoo's votive lamp
On Ganga's sacred
tide. [page ??:] |
Mrs. Hewitt has warm partialities for
the sea and
all that concerns it. Many of her best poems turn upon sea
adventures
or have reference to a maritime life. Some portions of her
"God bless the Mariner" are naïve and picturesque: e.g. —
God bless the happy mariner !
A homely garb
wears he,
And he goeth with a rolling gait,
Like a ship
before the sea.
He hath piped the loud "ay, ay,
Sir !"
O'er the voices of
the main
Till his deep tones have the
hoarseness
Of the rising
hurricane.
But oh, a spirit looketh
From out his clear
blue eye,
With a truthful childlike earnestness,
Like an angel
from the sky.
A venturous life the sailor leads
Between the
sky and sea,
But, when the hour of dread is past,
A merrier who than
he ? |
The tone of some quatrains entitled
"Alone,"
differs
materially from that usual with Mrs. Hewitt. The idea is happy
and
well managed. We shall be pardoned for copying
the whole poem: —
There lies a deep and sealed well
Within yon leafy forest hid,
Whose pent and lonely waters swell
Its confines chill and drear amid.
It hears the birds on every spray
Trill forth melodious notes of love;
It feels the warm sun's seldom ray
Glance on the stone its waves above;
And quick the gladdened waters rush
Tumultuous upward to the brink;
A seal is on their joyous gush,
And back, repressed, they coldly shrink.
Thus in their caverned space, apart,
Closed from the eye of day they dwell —
So, prisoned deep within my heart,
The tides of quick affection swell.
Each kindly glance, each kindly tone,
To joy its swift pulsations sway;
But none may lift the veiling stone
And give the franchised current way.
Smite THOU the rock, whose
eye alone
The hidden spring within may see,
And bid the flood, resistless one,
Flow forth, rejoicing unto Thee.'
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The merit of this piece, however, is greatly obscured first, by its
frequent inversions and, secondly, by its rhythmical defects. The lines,
| Its confines chill and dread amid, |
and
| Glance on the stone its waves above, |
might easily have been written, with directness,
etc. and
| Glance on the stone above its waves. |
The putting the
adjective after the noun is an inexcusable Gallicicms; but the putting
the preposition after the noun is alien to all language and in
opposition to all its principles. Such things, in general, only betray
the versifier''s poverty of resource; and when an inversrsion occurs we
usually say to ourselves -- 'Here the poet lacked the skill to make out
his line without distorting the natural or colloquial order of the
words'. Now and then, however, we must refer the error not to
deficiency of skill, but to something far less defensible -- to an idea
that such things belong to the essence of poetry -- that it needs them
to distinguish it from prose -- and that we are poetical very much in
the ration of our unprosaicalness at these points.
Mrs. Hewitt's sonnets are upon the
whole, her
most
praiseworthy compositions. One entitled "Hercules and
Omphale"
is noticeable for the vigor of its rhythm.
Reclined, enervate, on the couch
of ease,
No more he pants
for deeds of
high
emprize;
For Pleasure holds
in soft
voluptuous
ties
Enthralled, great Jove-descended
Hercules.
The hand that bound the Erymanthean
boar,
Hesperia's dragon
slew with
bold intent,
That from his
quivering side
in triumph
rent
The skin the Cleonœan lion wore,
Holds forth the goblet — while the
Lydian queen,
Robed like a
nymph, her brow
enwreathed
with vine,
Lifts high the
amphora brimmed
with
rosy wine,
And pours the draught the
crownéd cup
within.
And thus the soul, abased to sensual
sway,
Its worth forsakes — its might
foregoes for aye. |
The unusual force of the line
italicized, will be
observed. This force arises first, from the directness, or
colloquialism
without vulgarity, of its expression: — (the relative pronoun "which"
is
very happily omitted between "skin" and "the") — and, secondly, to the
musical repetition of the vowel in "Cleon œan," together with the
alliterative terminations in "Cleonœ an" and "li on." The
effect,
also, is much aided by the sonorous conclusion "wore."
Another and better instance of fine
versification
occurs in "Forgotten Heroes."
And the peasant mother at her
door,
To the babe that
climbed her
knee,
Sang aloud the land's heroic songs
—
Sang of
Thermopylæ —
Sang of Mycale — of Marathon —
Of proud
Platæa's day
—
Till the wakened hills from peak to
peak
Echoed the
glorious lay.
Oh, god like name ! — oh, god like
deed !
Song-borne afar
on every
breeze,
Ye are sounds to thrill like a battle
shout,
Leonidas !
Miltiades ! |
The general intention here is a line
of four
iambuses
alternating with a line of three; but, less through rhythmical skill
than
a musical ear, the poetess has been led into some exceedingly happy
variations
of the theme. For example; -- in place of the ordinary iambus as
the first foot of the first, of the second, and of the third line, a
bastard
iambus [page ??:] has been employed. These lines are thus
scanned:
An4d th4e
peas
| a2nt moth | e2r
at
| he2r door |
To4
th4e
babe | tha2t climbed | he2r
knee |
Sa4ng al4oud
| the2
land's | he2ro | i2c
songs | |
The fourth line,
| Sang o2f
|
The2rmo
| py2læ, |
is well varied by a trochee, instead of an iambus, in
the first
foot;
and the variation expresses forcibly the enthusiasm excited by the
topic
of the supposed songs, "Thermophylæ". The fifth line is
scanned
as the three first. The sixth is the general intention, and
consists
simply of iambuses. The seventh is like the three first and
the fifth. The eighth is like the fourth; and here again the
opening
trochee is admirably adapted to the movement of the
topic.
The ninth is the general intention, and is formed of four
iambuses.
The tenth is an alternating line and yet has four iambuses, instead of
the usual three; as has also the final line — and alternating one, too.
A fuller volume is in this manner given to the close of the subject;
and
this volume is fully in keeping with the rising enthusiasm. The
last
line but one has two bastard iambuses, thus:
| Ye4 ar4e
sounds
| to2 thrill | lik4e a4
bat | tl2e shout | . |
Upon the whole, it may be said that
the most
skilful
versifer could not have written lines better suited to the purposes of
the poet. The errors of "Alone,"
however, and of Mrs. Hewitt's poems generally, show that we must regard
the beauties pointed out above, merely in the light to which I have
already
alluded — that is to say, as occasional happiness to which the poetess
is led by a musical ear.
I should be doing this lady injustice
were I not
to mention that, at times, she rises into a higher and purer region of
poetry than might be supposed, or inferred, from any of the passages
which
I have hitherto quoted. The conclusion of her "Ocean Tide to the
Rivulet" puts me in mind of the rich spirit of Horne's noble epic,
"Orion." [page ??:]
Sadly the flowers their faded
petals
close
Where on thy banks they languidly
repose,
Waiting in vain to
hear thee
onward
press;
And pale Narcissus by thy margin
side
Hath lingered for thy coming, drooped
and
died,
Pining for thee
amid the
loneliness.
Hasten, beloved ! — here,
'neath the
o'erhanging rock
!
Hark ! from the deep, my
anxious hope to
mock,
They call me
back unto my
parent
main.
Brighter than Thetis thou — and, ah,
more
fleet !
I hear the rushing of thy fair
white feet!
Joy! joy ! —
my breast
receives
its own again !
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The personifications here are
well
managed.
The "Here! — 'neath the o'erhanging rock !" has the high merit of
being
truthfully, by which I mean naturally, expressed, and imparts
exceeding
vigor to the whole stanza. The idea of the ebb-tide, conveyed in
the second line italicized, is one of the happiest imaginable; and too
much praise can scarcely be bestowed on the "rushing" of the "fair
white
feet." The passage altogether is full of fancy, earnestness, and
the truest poetic strength. Mrs. Hewitt has given many such
indications
of a fire which, with more earnest endeavor, might be readily fanned
into
flame.
In character, she is sincere,
fervent,
benevolent
— sensitive to praise and to blame; in temperament melancholy; in
manner
subdued; converses earnestly yet quietly. In person she is tall
and
slender, with black hair and large gray eyes; complexion dark; general
expression of the countenance singularly interesting and agreeable.
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